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From
"The Black Death," a paper on Medieval Life for a Western Civics Class
The
plague had many causes: a lack of education, poor sanitary conditions,
and a
failure to deal with the problem in a timely manner.
Common men did not realize that fleas infected black rats, which
in turn bit humans. The
fleas traveled in the caravans people used to go from east to west.
Many Europeans did not
take much notice of a rat bite. They lived in dangerous and unsanitary
conditions, and another
bite meant very little. They attempted to stop the disease by praying
to God. In order to pray,
people packed into their churches and outside on the streets. The rats
thrived in those very
places where the people gathered, and large numbers of people became
infected. Thus, the
disease spread quickly. Europeans, unaware of what caused the disease,
were puzzled over
the “outbreak” of the plague.
Approximately one-third to two-thirds of the population (mostly
common people) died from
the Black Death. Instead of rationally dealing with the sanitary
problems that led to higher
populations of rats, people did irrational things. Families would not
care for the victims and ran
away from infected family members, so as not to catch the disease. This
allowed the disease to
continue to spread, until it became what was known as The Black Death.
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