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Writing Effective Conclusions

       One of the first things a reader remembers after having read a piece of writing is the last words the writer uses. For that reason, a writer should understand and take advantage of the power of an effective conclusion. Effective conclusions are particularly important in persuasive essays since they are the last chance the writer has to convince the reader. The following is a collection of suggestions for writing effective conclusions.

1. Use a summary statement rather than phrases like the following: "In summary...," "To conclude...," "To summarize...," or "In closing...." These are too obvious and vague to be effective. Use a transitional phrase which summarizes a point in your essay instead. A sample summary statement is as follows: "Clearly judicial homicide has resulted in preventable innocent deaths; this "collateral damage" is not something we should condone."

2. Use a quotation. For example, use "If not now, when?," to illustrate how the topic of your paper has has created problems.  And following the quote, provide a "bridge" which leads your reader to understand how this quote helps reveal or support your main idea.  "We should be able to explain our laws to our children, without reservations."   (Do not leave "naked quotes:"  never assume your reader understands why the quote is there or what purpose it serves.)

3. Refer to the story or character used in the introduction, such as "We need not suffer the consequences which devastated the Wilson family, instead we can provide more humane and reasonable legal reforms."

4. Use a cleverly crafted generalization, such as "Capital punishment not only results in the deaths of innocents, it also undermines the moral authority of the law."

5. Express your hopes as you look to the future. "When people in our society become better informed about the consequences of these flawed laws, they will be persuaded that we can do better."  Or "When people remember who we are and what we stand for, they will refuse to be complicit in murder by proxy."

In addition to the aforementioned suggestions, persuasive essays should include one of the following:

6. Issue a call for action, such as "Now that we have seen how exceptions to the rule of law have devastated families, and undermined our social order, we can contact our representatives and let them know we insist on justice."

7. Use a question and a call for action together. Example: "Why do we continue to ignore the discrimination, injustice, and fatal consequences of the death penalty, when all other western-industrialized democracies have embraced a more civil and just solution?  The execution of prisoners who pose no threat to society, contradicts our most basic values and traditions.  We must join our neighbors in refusing to acquiesce in this travesty.""

Effective conclusions

  • Reflect on how your topic relates to larger issues (in the novel, in society, in history)
  • Show how your topic affects the reader’s life
  • Evaluate the concepts you have presented
  • Issue a call for action on the part of your audience
  • Ask questions generated by your findings
  • Make predictions
  • Recommend a solution
  • Connect back to introduction, esp. if you used a metaphor, anecdote, or vivid image
  • Give a personal statement about the topic
  • http://powayusd.sdcoe.k12.ca.us/projects/edtechcentral/writingwStyle/structure.htm

Conclusions   this handout will explain the functions of conclusions and offer strategies...
Your conclusion gives your reader something to take away that will help ...
www.unc.edu/depts/wcweb/handouts/conclusions.html

LEOStrategies for Writing a Conclusion. Literacy Education Online, St. Cloud State University. 18 May 2005 <http://leo.stcloudstate.edu/acadwrite/conclude.html>.

Conclusions. Nesbitt-Johnston Writing Center, Hamilton College. 17 May 2005 <http://www.hamilton.edu/academic/Resource/WC/SampleConclusions.html>.
 

Unsorted Research on Conclusions...  

Essay Conclusions from the UVic Writer's Guide
How to Begin to Write: Organization, Introductions, Conclusions Roane State Community College OWL
Introductions and Conclusions from Cleveland State University Writing Center

Writing a conclusion

Just as there is no formula for an introduction, there is none for a conclusion either. What form a conclusion will take entirely depends on what precedes it. There are some rules of thumb to keep in mind though:

  • Don't depend on your conclusion to sum up the body paragraphs. Your paragraphs should flow naturally into one another and connections should be made among them. Summary can be an important function of conclusions but keep this part brief; readers know what they've just read.
  • Don't simply regurgitate your introduction. Try to talk about your topic in a new way now that you've presented all that you have about it.
  • Point out the importance or the implications of what you've just said on an area of societal concern. Again, this is the so what? factor stated perhaps a bit more dramatically.
  • For analytical papers in particular, you could mention the lack of conclusion in the field. This demonstrates that you understand the complexity of the subject matter.
  • Perhaps propose what you feel is a natural next step to take in light of what your argument is attempting to convince people of.
  • Don't end your conclusion with a quotation or with a statement that could very well be the subject of another paper. The former deflects attention away from you as writer and thinker; the latter deflects attention from what you're saying in your paper.

 

Here are some additional thoughts on final words: 

Strategies for Writing a Conclusion from LEO

Essay Conclusions from the UVic Writer's Guide

How to Begin to Write: Organization, Introductions, Conclusions from Roane State Community College OWL

Introductions and Conclusions from Cleveland State University Writing Center, plus some Sample Conclusions

Writing Conclusions

Quick Ideas for Writing Conclusions
   
The Simple Summary
  • The writer restates the main points of the essay.
  • This strategy is effective for long essays dealing in unfamiliar concepts.
  • This method can seem dull in short essays.
The Pan-to-a-Larger-Landscape Approach
  • The writer demonstrates how the topic has broad significance.
  • This strategy reveals the importance of the issue discussed.
  • Analogy might be a useful tool in this kind of conclusion.
  • The topic at hand might be tied to a larger philosophic question, political issue, or view of the human condition.
  • The writer must be careful to make the connection to the original thesis clear.
The Proposal Conclusion
  • The writer asks readers to do something with a call to action.
  • This strategy is often used in analyses and arguments.
  • A similar approach is the "call for further study" approach.
The Scenic or Anecdotal Conclusion
  • The writer uses a scene or brief story to subtly demonstrate the topic’s significance.
  • This approach establishes an emotional connection with the reader.
  • The technique can be as effective in argument as in expressive or open form writing.
The Hook and Return
  • The writer returns to the essay’s lead or hook device.
  • If a scene or example grabs the reader’s attention in the beginning, the writer takes the scenario a step further in the conclusion.
  • This technique unifies the essay--it can seem very polished.
The Delayed Thesis Conclusion
  • The writer takes an exploratory approach, opening with a question or problem.
  • The essay deals with a variety of proposals and solutions.
  • In the conclusion, the writer states the thesis as a discovery.
  • This approach can be effective for controversial issues because all sides can be examined.
  • Check with your professor to make sure that this type of conclusion is appropriate for your assignment.
Source: Compiled from The Allyn and Bacon Guide to Writing, John D. Ramage and John C. Bean, eds.
Writing: Conclusions
Description: What makes a good conclusion? On these websites you will find resources that describe effective conclusions and offer tips and strategies for writing them well. Different typs of conclusions for different methods of writing are discussed. Included are three eThemes resources on writing essays, research papers, and paragraphs.
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Resource Links: Quick Ideas for Writing Conclusions
This page describes six different conclusion styles and talks about when it might be appropriate to use one over another.

Conclusions
This page has strategies for writing effective conclusions and also gives examples of types of conclusions to avoid.

Strategies for Writing a Conclusion
The conclusion should be the best part of the paper. This page has suggestions and strategies for writing strong conclusions that make a good last impression on the reader.

Conclusion Tips
This page has more tips for writing short but effective conclusions.

BrainPOP! Five Paragraph Essay
Watch a short movie about how to write a five-paragraph essay, including the conslusion then take a pop-quiz. There is also a crossword puzzle. NOTE: This site is available by subscription only.

Ending the Essay
Here are some tips for writing an ending paragraph that "closes the discussion without closing it off."

Tips for Writing Conclusions
Here are a few suggestions for making your conclusions more interesting.

Writing Conclusions
This printable two-page PDF file details effective and ineffective strategies for writing conclusions. NOTE: Reading level is for older students.

Sample Conclusions
Here are two sample conclusions from actual student papers. How effective are they? What do the authors do right, and how could these conclusions be improved?

Effective Conclusions
This page instructs students on how to write an effective ending for an essay or research paper.

Suggestions for Writing Conclusions
This page briefly describes different types of conclusions and what a good conclusion should do.

 
 

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