Writing
Effective Conclusions
One of the first things a reader
remembers after having read a piece of writing is the last words the
writer uses. For that reason, a writer should understand and take
advantage of the power of an effective conclusion. Effective
conclusions are particularly important in persuasive essays since
they are the last chance the writer has to convince the reader. The
following is a collection of suggestions for writing effective
conclusions.
1. Use a summary statement rather than phrases like the
following: "In summary...," "To conclude...," "To summarize...," or "In
closing...." These are too obvious and vague to be effective. Use a
transitional phrase which summarizes a point in your essay instead. A
sample summary statement is as follows: "Clearly judicial homicide has
resulted in preventable innocent deaths; this "collateral damage" is not
something we should condone."
2. Use a quotation. For example, use "If not now, when?," to
illustrate how the topic of your paper has has created problems.
And following the quote, provide a "bridge" which leads your reader to
understand how this quote helps reveal or support your main idea.
"We should be able to explain our laws to our children, without
reservations." (Do not leave "naked quotes:"
never assume your reader understands why the quote is there or what
purpose it serves.)
3. Refer to the story or character used in the introduction,
such as "We need not suffer the consequences which devastated the Wilson
family, instead we can provide more humane and reasonable legal
reforms."
4. Use a cleverly crafted generalization, such as "Capital
punishment not only results in the deaths of innocents, it also
undermines the moral authority of the law."
5. Express your hopes as you look to the future. "When people
in our society become better informed about the consequences of these
flawed laws, they will be persuaded that we can do better." Or
"When people remember who we are and what we stand for, they will refuse
to be complicit in murder by proxy."
In addition to the aforementioned suggestions, persuasive essays
should include one of the following:
6. Issue a call for action, such as "Now that we have seen how
exceptions to the rule of law have devastated families, and undermined
our social order, we can contact our representatives and let them know
we insist on justice."
7. Use a question and a call for action together. Example:
"Why do we continue to ignore the discrimination, injustice, and fatal
consequences of the death penalty, when all other western-industrialized
democracies have embraced a more civil and just solution? The
execution of prisoners who pose no threat to society, contradicts
our most basic values and traditions. We must join our neighbors
in refusing to acquiesce in this travesty."" |